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Aimee Wai's avatar

thank you Strange Pilgrims for believing in my work 🤍🤍

Strange Pilgrims's avatar

We love you Aimee!!

Marjee C's avatar

I’m smitten with this piece and it serves as such a gorgeous model to follow your guidance around what Strange Pilgrims is looking for in stories. This is a story that many well-meaning workshops would deflate.

Aimee Wai's avatar

Thank you Marjee for the read and your thoughtfulness. Strangely enough, this was the product of bringing a poem into a fiction workshop! So I’m very thankful for strange pilgrims to have published this hybrid baby. Much love 🤍

Eugenia P. Frankenberg 🥀's avatar

Wow, I was in love with this story from start to finish. From existential dread to clarity and finding meaning in the simple things 😊

Aimee Wai's avatar

thank you so much for reading 🤍

Hannah Eve Levy's avatar

love this piece Aimee! and I'm laughing because our answers to Karan's question about writing routine were so similar! helps to know I'm not alone. the fire hydrant moment is *~real~*

Aimee Wai's avatar

oh my gosh, yay! thank you for leaving a comment! I got super excited over your photo essay and loved seeing that form. & yes exactly. when the fire hydrant moment hits I’m like, is this just how it works?? and if so, WHY

L. Alyse Amidon's avatar

"as if called by the strike of a gong, there was a knock at my door, and I acted like it wasn’t unusual for it to be you" the shift to second person here made my breath catch. so beautiful. loved the ending and the journey this story took us on.

Aimee Wai's avatar

Thank you so much for reading 🤍

Niamh's avatar

Oh this was beautiful

Aimee Wai's avatar

Thank you Niamh for reading 🤍

🍂lillia🍂's avatar

This is so beautiful! I love the fuzzy time feel of the piece where time just seems to blend as the person struggles with their existential questions. They're searching and searching and in this search, time becomes fuzzy. It was such a beautiful read!

Aimee Wai's avatar

thank you for reading! I’m so glad the fuzziness came through for you 🤍

Samiksha's avatar

very moving, with subtlety and speed at the same time. need a second to recover.

book inc's avatar

This was such a wonderful read, thank you!