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Laney Lenox's avatar

So good, the end hit me like a pinch in the gut in the best way!

Nigel Pugh's avatar

The last line, especially with your uptick of expression, was a knockout. Great piece.

norka keller's avatar

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you!!!

Bryce Paradis's avatar

The first read of this was heck on my sleepy brain. Read two was much better 😅

Ellen Tristram's avatar

Wow. Just wow

Kit Nichols Spielberger's avatar

This is brilliant, Norka.

Andrea Cavedo's avatar

Oof, this is so good

Erin McIntosh's avatar

Perfection.

aliyah's avatar

stunning

Sarah's avatar

🫢