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Lisa Fransson's avatar

I found this so charged it was unsettling, even if the chainsaw was on the other end of the phone line I didn't trust it not to slice it's way through. Great micro 🤓

EllenWrites's avatar

This is an amazing micro—so much tension in so few words!! Bravissimo!!

Kgaz's avatar

Not exactly what I expected to see on my feed, but it was very lyrical in it’s writing (which I tend to like 😊)

Kitty Baker's avatar

Reading or writing sexual encounters has never been my vibe. But I have say, the intelligence and poetics of this piece turns the ticklish topic over for me. From soft porn to literary lust. So many clever and subtle choices. Great job.

Eli Loren's avatar

I love the mix of jealousy and excitiment I get from reading these micros! I don't think I could have competed with an opener like, "The phone sex only starts to get interesting after the chainsaw comes into play." This piece is so much fun!