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Lisa Fransson's avatar

I found this so charged it was unsettling, even if the chainsaw was on the other end of the phone line I didn't trust it not to slice it's way through. Great micro 🤓

EllenWrites's avatar

This is an amazing micro—so much tension in so few words!! Bravissimo!!

Kgaz's avatar

Not exactly what I expected to see on my feed, but it was very lyrical in it’s writing (which I tend to like 😊)

Kitty Baker's avatar

Reading or writing sexual encounters has never been my vibe. But I have say, the intelligence and poetics of this piece turns the ticklish topic over for me. From soft porn to literary lust. So many clever and subtle choices. Great job.