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Mars Wilder's avatar

I'm a little confused. The author says she had never been to a creative writing workshop before, and implies this is the reason she starts believing "this analysis of work was the standard". I'm guessing there's other sources she absorbed this belief from, but without context I can only assume that she had a bad experience with one creative writing workshop. This absolutely might color one's perception of such workshops, but I find it a little unfair to come to the conclusion that all analysis will be the same at *every* workshop after only having gone to one of them.

I think that including context does a great service for writing, especially when we think about who might be reading it. Art is profoundly shaped and informed by the beliefs and perspective of the artist, no matter the topic at hand; this is something I learned as early as high school AP Literature, so I will never agree with the concept of a clean separation of art from artist - it just can't be done without harming the art itself.

When I'm writing something, I often like to think about who it's for, not on a commodification level, but on the level of a dialogue between a creator and their audience. Art carries an implicit message, an implicit belief, a feeling that was had when it was made, because it's a form of communication as well as entertainment. Writing an autobiographical piece, you are sharing a slice of life, like a story or a narrative from your own life experience. Is it that weird to expect that readers will want to know more about your background and where you come from, in order to more concretely place themselves in your shoes and see the ways in which they relate to you, and the ways in which they don't? In my opinion, empathy comes more readily when you can get a fuller picture of someone's life, including the ways in which they deal with socioeconomic & material constraints such as class status, employment, cultural background, because these are important factors in a person's life experience.

The people giving critique might have not used the best language for it, or might have come off too strongly, but I do think it's valuable advice to think about how you're communicating your ideas or your experience to other people while you're writing about it. Like everything else in writing, it's an incredibly difficult balance and you risk ruining the flow of the story, but the same things can happen with exposition, dialogue, etc.

The part of cancel culture that I do think is truly harmful and even scary, and that I have seen time and time again in creative spaces, is the aversion to even writing about negative or taboo topics such as sexual assault, paraphilias, stigmatized mental illnesses like bpd or aspd, racism/xenophobia, and other such topics, just because 'people don't want to read/watch something about that', or fear of grossing people out or offending them. The aversion to feeling negative emotion of any kind is one that I think needs to be talked about more in writing spaces, and I was hoping this critique might go into that a little bit more, because I have been met with backlash from even *within* alternative spaces like LGBT and furry communities for making and supporting art that is just a little bit too "out there" and might risk offending some pearl-clutchers who oppose the idea that I should have human rights as a transgender person.

Jess Áine Barry's avatar

Excellent piece - the author's experience writing about her chronic illness only to be scolded for not being an example of an intersection of hardship really rings true to me. It shouldn't be about 'who wrote this' only it should be about 'what are they saying and why?" Too. But all to often now it's about communicating self only, and only the parts of self that are acceptable to the zeitgeist. Excellent piece.

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